Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Caffeine High

So this is what spilled out after Marc, Nilda, Jade and I hit Dunn Brothers. I still have issues with a few parts, so I will be revising it, but this is the rough draft the class seemed to like for now.


I would like to add that the last paragraph is an exaggeration, and I only added it because I liked the description. I think I embodied a heroine addict for the moment. It seemed to make a good ending. One fellow student pointed out that I should probably go for energy drinks instead of coffee to up the ante. Like I need more sugar. . .


Coffee Addictions

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